Monday, 23 April 2012

Argumentative Essay ^^

After the First Delivery of A Woman
Should woman quit after her first delivery? As for my opinion, having one kid is enough for a woman and she should quit after the first delivery. I am saying this as this action is important because of finance, health and the quality of life.

Finance is one of the most important that need to be cared of. In this millennium age, the cost of living has increased. Everything needs to be paid, so if the number of child is only one, the parents will have less worries on their finance. Apart from that, the cost of hospital bill is also expensive each time a mother deliver a baby. So, if she just deliver a baby, she will have to pay only once for the hospital bill. When the number of family members increased, the total cost that need to be spent also increased as a family will live in the same house. When there is only one child, this reduce the electricity and water bills.

Next, health is also an important reason why a woman should quit after first delivery. Everytime a mother deliver a baby, she will face a lot health complication. So, if she quits after first delivery, she will not face the risk of having complication for the next delivery. As a mother becomes older, pregnancy also becomes not good because the baby will face higher chance to get a lot of complication and health problems. Other than that, after than that, after a delivery, a lot of body cells in a woman's body will be damaged and there will hormonal imbalance occur. If there are a lot of body tissues damaged, it will take time for the woman to recover.

Other than that, a woman should also quit after her first delivery to improve the quality of life. With only one child in he family, the parent can give full attention to him or her. This will give the child enough love and care and can reduce the risk for the child to have social problems. the parents will also have a better life as they will only need to focus on a child only. This will give them time for themselves too. Lastly, the bond between family members becomes stronger because the number of family member is less.

As a conclusion, I would strictly say again that woman should quit after her first delivery as this has a lot of advantages in the aspects of finance, health and the quality of life.


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