Sunday, 22 April 2012

Argumentative essay


The best for the woman

  Should women quit after their first delivery? To me , it is better for a women to quit after their first delivery. The reasons why women should quit after first delivery because of financial issues, health risk and heavy responsibilities.

  Finance is the most important things to care about nowadays. With the unpredictable economy nowadays, family should save every penny they have and to spend wisely. Cost of life has increased and this will burden many family in this world. People cannot afford to pay the hospital bills and support the family. So before starting a family, make sure that one have stable income. If a family have many children they have to spend much on their food and their expenses. But if they only have a child to take care of , they do not have to spend much on them .

  Next, there are lots of health risk that need to be faced. During delivery, complication may occur. Many health problems can occur and some may lead to death. For example, a man with positive rhesus factor that delivering a negative rhesus factor baby will mix their blood and this can cause the second baby to die. There are also woman that still in good health even though they pregnant for so many times. But we don't have to take the risk as the best way is just quit after the first delivery and having just one child.

  Besides that , parents will have less responsibilities. By having a child, it would be much easier for the family to take care of their child. The child will have enough love and care from his/her parents because there is no other children they have to take care of. This can prevent the child from having social problems when they grow up.

  
  As a conclusion, woman should quit after their first delivery and should only have one child because this is much more better for the family.


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