Women ,Should Quit OR Continue

  Argumentative Essay

Women,Should Quit or Continue

   Should women quit after first delivery? In my point of view,they should quit after first their first child . This is because  they  will not have to take the risk of facing breast cancer ,their only child can be well-nurtured ,and the family will not face a high living cost .

     It is realistic to say that a mothers can spend full concentration on the only child in a family. As a responsible mother ,she is able to nurture and educate her child so that he or she may mature into a decent soul later .Furthermore ,the child will not hunger love and affection from their mother as she is all the time with him and definitely will not become a rebel in social .On the other hand ,with more children,mothers would have to fulfil all the needs and requirements of the children and it might be a hard task for the young family with low monthly income  .

     According to a recent research from World Health Organization(WHO), for a mother who has more child ,it is risky in developing of breast cancer to her.Breast cancer ,as we know ,is a chronic disease which is fatal for women .Until today,there is no cure for it. If the mother is ill-striken ,it is impossible to take care of their children longer .This is even worse for those who have toddlers in the family .Care and love couldn’t be instilled into their childrens’ hearts .Hence,it is less risky when a woman only spores one child..Moreover ,she is unfortunately die at a very young age ,their children will live in much sad depression and have to undergo the hardships in their tough life without mother's love and caring .

     Besides ,parents will also have to face a high cost of living if they were to have more than a child .With the unpredictable economy and the repeat of the Great Depression ,families are advised to save every penny they have and to spend wisely .In the 21^st century,price of goods like clothes and food has risen dramatically and some parents are not able to generate enough revenue to support the family.Hence,poverty comes Most women nowadays have jobs and some even work over time or have multiple jobs in order to support their family income together with their husbands .However ,it is getting tougher for them too as their children are growing up as they need to pay higher fees in their higher level of education.

     As a conclusion , women should only have one child as the mother will not have to take the risk of facing breast cancer ,the only child can be well-nurtured ,and the family will not face a high living cost .

Lim Jia Yen     17453

Electrical and Electronic Engineering