Sunday, 22 April 2012

Argumentative Essay


Quit After First Delivery

            Should women quit after first delivery? I strongly agreed with the motion that women should quit after first delivery. There are many reasons why women should quit after first delivery which are it will affect the mother's health, can give full concentration to the child and lower the cost living.
             According to the research made by the World Health Organization (WHO), it is proven that women who spore more than a child has higher risk of having breast cancer. This is not good as it will affect the mother's health. How can a mother take a good care of her children if she's sick? Breast cancer can cause death to a person. Life would become unmanageable when the mother's suffers from the disease. So I think why should a woman continue pregnant if that would affect her health?
            Other than that, the father and mother can also give full concentration to the child without neglecting him or her. If you're having more children, you cannot entertain all of them. Some of them might be neglected. Mother also face lighter responsibilities with only one child. She can give full concentration on him or her. So the child will not hunger of love.
            Furthermore, parents have to face high cost living if they have many children. With only one child, they do not have to spend a lot on them. They can save their penny to use it in the future and for the child's education. If they have more than one child, they need to spend a lot on them. So by having only one child will lighten the parents burden.
            The conclusion is woman should quit after first delivery. There are many good effects if you're having only one child.

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