Saturday, 21 April 2012


Argumentative essay

Quiting after first delivery is for women

            Should women quit after first delivery? I think women should quit after first delivery. This is because if women quit after first delivery, the advantages are it is good for health, maintain nation’s population and have a easier family discussion.

            Women who quit after the first delivery could maintain her health. For an example, a women who continue after the first delivery need some time to recover to their full strength and to adjust to their new role. Study shows that the uterus will slowly shrink and they become overly sensitive, irritable and may cry without reason. Survey which had been done shows that women’s health will be affected after frequent delivery.

            In order to maintain the population of mankind, quit after first delivery is required. The population of human is increasing days after days and become uncontrollable. 2000 census population reported that was 23953136 people and in 2006, the growth rate increase approximately about 1.8% to 26888000 because of continuing delivery. This uncontrolled delivery will leads to insufficient of food, needs and so on.

            Family discussion will be easier by quitting after first delivery. Argument between sibling will totally not going to occur. This causes the aim is achieved and quicker and easier. For example, when discuss about going for a trip, child no 1 will suggest different place which we should go compare to the second child. This will contributes to a less efficiency of discussion.

            In a nutshell, women must quit after first delivery in order to get healthier, maintaining the population of nation and have an easier family discussion. Since quit after first delivery bring lots of advantages to women herself, family and even the nation, so why shouldn’t women quit after first delivery.

BY
LAW CHEW KAR

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